i agree.. this piece is wayyyyy too dense. i think it needs a lower density and maybe a slightly lighter color.. or maybe some dark brown highlights to break up all that thick black hair.
i do like the shape of the hairline with the temple flaps though.

thing that i find funny about Farrel's videos is that he only ever shows before and after.. never goes into specifics about the piece or the process.. i guess he keeps it mysterious to keep the unenlightened thinking that they need him.