Just had a look at the new pics.... what I think would really help you on your custom order is to build in a higher front-graduation .... you said you think something is `off` a bit ---I reckon it`s that.... you need more of a staggered-density at the very front and it will be more age-appropriate, but it`s well blended-in at the sides and back...just needs a bit of `tweaking`at the front....