looks great, need more clarification on the hairline,
may look ok in reality, as we know cameras lighting angles are very deceiving,
also it has to be seid that some guys do keep a decent hairline throughout life.

as mentioned you could try thining out the hairline,
i remember having to tell , instruct my hairdresser to cut in reccesion at the temples,
on my second visit, shoudnt have to they should know ,