Overall not bad....I would second the razor comb idea. All you have to do is get rid of that "bump" where the piece hair meets your own and it should fall into place.

Also saw a kid on Youtube using a Bic razor to remove bulk by simply pinching a small amount of the hair between his thumb and the blades of the razor and pulling outward. It worked great (for him anyway) to eliminate poofy areas. I think BA uses a Bic razor as well