Hey Paul,
The hair looks great as usual but it looks like you are having some camera problems
A couple of hints for pics:
1. Lighting is everything! The easiest way to get good lighting is to take your pics facing a window that gets a fair amount of indirect sunlight.
2. Play around with the camera's settings. If you notice the next to the last pic the door frame is in perfect focus but the subject (your hair) is blurry. Try using the macro setting on the camera. This will allow the lens to focus on objects that are a lot closer to the camera.
I want to see these things in high def!