Hi MrNewYork

It looks good but, Just some constructive feedback. I think you should let your hair grown out about an inch more, at least where it meets the piece, then you could blend it better especially in the back. Kinda looks like all your hair is cut to one length, Then the piece is longer.

You also should add some recession to the temples and decrease the density at the front by about 10% and learn how to bleach your knots if you can see them, there are a lot of post on the old form on how to bleach. I found If my piece is to thick I leave the bleach on longer on purpose, this creates a lot of shedding and in a week or so the density will thin out. If you have shine from the glue when it drys I press around the front a bit with my finger to dull it a bit, or I use a brush with plastic bristles and lightly rub over the glue to dull it.

Just read the old forum and in time with experience you'll get it to look great!