You have a little wide forehead syndrome going on like me. So I comb the sides forward a little to cover it up. Actually you could just do that and comb the top forward also and flip up at the front to show the hairline some, not moving the piece forward at all.
Now you have cooled down, You will now see what this forum is about, Use it for hair replacement problems mate not to slag people off.
Ok I prefer the last photos after you took Kliffords advice, That looks good and you will get better and better as you do it and become more experienced, Well done.